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Post by Edd on Jul 3, 2009 10:44:35 GMT
Wow, i cant belive im posting this here, must literally be my first post in about 2 years or something....  Anyway this is basically a render from Cinema 4D spruced up a little bit in Photoshop. If it appears too saturated or sharpened thats because im currently working from a laptop, and i cant properly see the clarity of the image lol, very annoying..  Anyway, enjoy #laugh.gif# eddybiel.deviantart.com/art/IMOK-BABY-128067212 |
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Post by ¢brandon` on Jul 6, 2009 9:35:33 GMT
wow bro. thats funny on acoount its been years since i been here as well. one of my first posts in years. I also am constricted to laptop art. yes i know how it feels.
we are so similar arent we ?
=P
hey man this isnt bad at all. nice soft colors and crisp sharp niceness. good quality. I feel like you should have cropped the text towards the top or bottom. really either way looks nice. (i used my browser to crop the top and bottom off lol)
but yeah mann. I feel like compo wise its just a hair boring sitting in the middle of the canvas you feel ?
I think right now it looks good. but i really would love to see more to it. more contrast. especially around the wording. Id like to see some lighter colors (maybe even some whites.)
this could really be used to bring focus to various different parts of the text. get abstract with it to. nothing big.
maybe if you added some things extending off the text the composition would be better as well. without cropping. a nice thick top border with thinner bottom border I always love. =D
just opinions.
I could see this really shaping up to be something really nice.
not that it isnt now.
but yeah.
uhm. what i say is just rolling from a visual i had in my mind. you may read this and just be like. what is he talking about etc.
so yeah just some suggestions etc.
bro. =]
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