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Post by ŋєт™ on Apr 9, 2009 2:28:22 GMT
I took a walk the other day when it was nice. I would have had these up, but my computer was dead when I took them which was why I was out walking anyways lol I'm a sad individual... Spring is HereSpring BloomAnchorAny comments would be appreciated.
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Post by Flex-FX on Apr 11, 2009 16:01:00 GMT
It is a strange way of photography but i really like it.
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Post by Saknika on Apr 14, 2009 23:21:04 GMT
Spring is Here The focus on this looks great. I really love that you nailed it, and still had excellent depth of field, because you've really isolated the element you wanted to focus on. Fantastic. I also really love the colours. Red is already a very prominent colour, but to put it against the cooler colours is just an added bonus. Composition wise though, I'm not feeling it as much. You have the right idea, but I feel that you need to work the crashpoints a bit more, and to have less leading lines going everywhere. I also feel that if you were in just a bit closer, it'd really bring out the shapes that are going on with those buds, and make the photo that much more dynamic. Still, great job.
Spring Bloom Once again, great colour and focus abilities. You're almost working the crashpoints great here too, but in this one because such a small part is in focus and there really isn't anything to the background, it definitely needs a much closer crop. Bring it in, eliminate the empty and useless space, and really make it a dynamic photo.
Anchor I'm not too fond of this one, especially that big nuclear explosion of a sun. It's incredibly distracting and not good composition wise for you. It's also difficult to determine the point of focus on the image, making it more confusing than it already is. Lighting wise though this is fantastic. You can tell by how amazing the rope/wire looks with the contrast. It's definitely a good time to have been out doing photography. Overall though, it's definitely a weaker photo in your collection.
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Post by ŋєт™ on Apr 16, 2009 21:35:09 GMT
Thanks for the comments. I'll play around with cropping and see what I can get.
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Post by Saknika on Apr 17, 2009 4:15:10 GMT
Lemme know what you come up with, I'm curious to see it.
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Post by ŋєт™ on Apr 17, 2009 14:38:13 GMT
Indeed. I'll either update the deviation or make a new one.
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Post by Saknika on Apr 19, 2009 16:25:30 GMT
Sounds like a plan.
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