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Post by ŋєт™ on Feb 25, 2009 23:37:37 GMT
So I went to a local sculpture/statue park for a bit today before class. I messed with the images in my photography class and uploaded them. Upon viewing them on my computer at home I can't believe the difference of color...I'm thinking about re-doing them and re-submitting them. Anyways here they are. Any comments would be appreciated. R a m pF l o wAutumn Fades
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Post by Jonny on Feb 26, 2009 12:45:19 GMT
The first one is probably my favourite, really sweet angle with a really detached feel to make it quite abstract. Good punchy colours, nice shots.
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Post by ŋєт™ on Feb 26, 2009 17:30:25 GMT
Wow man that means alot coming from you Jonny
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Post by Saknika on Feb 27, 2009 14:05:18 GMT
Ramp Excellent leading lines and use of colour. The orange on blue is great because it's complementary colours, making it pop right out. You had fairly good light too, but I'm not fond of that one bright spot on the side. Still, pretty cool.
Flow Like Ramp, this has good lines, and colour. I like the look of this more too, because of the direction it curves. But again you have that one bright spot, this time it being the cloud. Try burning it down a bit if possible.
Autumn Fades Not too fond of this one. It has good leading lines and an interesting angle, but it feels confusing and intrusive to me. This is probably the weakest of the three.
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Post by ŋєт™ on Feb 27, 2009 20:33:14 GMT
I do agree the last one is rather meh. It was the colors that got me on that one I guess.
Thanks for the comments on the first 2. I'm going to be using one of them for my next project and I'll play around with your suggestions. Out of the first 2 which one do you like the most?
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Post by Saknika on Feb 27, 2009 23:45:15 GMT
I definitely like flow the most. :3
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Post by Signore Kai on Feb 28, 2009 20:34:01 GMT
I like the first one. The leading lines are great. The punchy colours are great too. My only issue is it leads me into nothing. Would have been better if you could somehow make the branches in the middle disappear, so that it leads straight into the sky. And that white overexposed patch (clouds?) is really ugly.
The other two, I'm not really a fan.
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