fredy
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Feb 22, 2009 15:03:05 GMT
Post by fredy on Feb 22, 2009 15:03:05 GMT
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Retched
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Feb 23, 2009 5:30:37 GMT
Post by Retched on Feb 23, 2009 5:30:37 GMT
The left part of the header is a well composed random. I'm not too sure about the other half though. You mixed two different styles. Usually abstract and vector work, but your color choice was a bit off. Looks cool, though : )
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Mar 3, 2009 23:47:36 GMT
Post by gray929 on Mar 3, 2009 23:47:36 GMT
Wow, how many brushed did you use? I think it looks great, especially that left corner. But there are a few things I have a problem with. xD First, the text. It looks very out of place with all those vector brushes around it. The location is good, just not the style. I also think it would look cool if you put more of that city tube with the sky scrapers behind the text but made the height shorter so it looks proportionate. I don't like how you sort of reflect the menu buttons on the right side of the banner. I also don't know what that random black rectangle is doing there. ![:P](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/tongue.png) Also, the purple design in the top middle seems to be conflicting due too the two styles mentioned by Retched. I'd raise the opacity on some of the brushes to around 100% or sharpen some because it doesn't flow well with the rest of the piece. I guess its hard to make everything flow well together since you are using so many colors. There are sort of like two compositions. The left part which is very vibrant and full, then the rest which has a very soft, water color like background which kind of throws the piece off. Its a great piece, has potential you just need to put some more work into it. =)
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