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Post by ŋєт™ on Feb 10, 2009 4:19:11 GMT
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Post by Saknika on Feb 10, 2009 5:02:12 GMT
It's interesting. I'm not too fond of the composition, since it leads out of the top left corner and doesn't draw as far from the right as it really should. I'm also iffy on the way it's just a bright white light. I wish there was some tonal definition to it. But the metal looks really great, and the angle is good too.
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Post by ŋєт™ on Feb 10, 2009 5:03:34 GMT
Well I made it black and white. Do you think it would be better in color? It's not much, but at least it's a little more amber.
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Post by comicIDIOT on Feb 10, 2009 5:59:04 GMT
Remove the flare on the right as well. I'd remove it, even though it's faint & soft it still distracts the eye.
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Post by Saknika on Feb 10, 2009 8:56:53 GMT
I'm not sure if it'd look better in colour or not. Basically what you need is just for the light to fade out more so that it's not so harsh.
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Post by Jonny on Feb 26, 2009 12:39:28 GMT
I like it, I like it quite a lot. It's just a cool, simple abstract. Okay, that lil' bit of flare could go, but other than that it's great!
Maybe you could clone out the light behind the post? See what that's like?
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