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Post by coldsteel on Dec 16, 2008 20:45:44 GMT
Could I get some feedback on this sig I made. I tried some new techniques. Thanks.  |
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Post by quicksilverhybrid on Dec 17, 2008 21:12:27 GMT
I love the red in the background. It goes great with the green, being complimentary colors and everything. The only thing I would change is the text. The word "steel" was hard to read at first.
Otherwise, it looks great.
xx
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Post by Amanda on Dec 25, 2008 4:49:34 GMT
Very nice job on this signature. I love the colors. I like the vectorish c4d background behind the stock, i think it flows well with the signature. The Stock/render blends nicely. I especially like the placement and the angle of the stock. The text with the bar above and below fits well and looks great. Good Job
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Post by coldsteel on Dec 27, 2008 23:31:58 GMT
thanks for the feedback guys!
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Retched
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Post by Retched on Jan 31, 2009 16:25:55 GMT
It looks great! I'm really liking what you've done.
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sharon
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Post by sharon on Feb 8, 2009 16:30:50 GMT
I actually REALLY like that - the sig overall looks very clean, great job!
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Post by ishmael on Feb 8, 2009 17:52:21 GMT
No such sunshine from me.
It just looks like another layer cake. Image in the background, add a stock on top, the end. come on.
Blend in the stock, it looks like a sore thumb just sticking out of the image. I realize the green tried to do that, but seriously?
Where is the focal point? I can't find one to look at, you added too much detail over on the text, so my eye wanders and doesn't have a clue what its looking at.
I don't get it, there is that white cape crap in the stock going left and right and who knows where, and there are other stocks you used going up and down and wow. I don't find any flow in here.
Take the stock, duplicate it, set it on lighten, and erase parts while moving it around the tag. Duplicate it again, set it to darken, repeat. This is an extremely easy way to blend in tags without putting forth too much effort.
Don't rely on abstract renders to give you a "good" tag. Use photoshop's round brushes, and then smudge them. thats why the tools were put in there.
Get rid of the text, I am standing behind my point that no one can use text well in a tag, in this one, it just takes away from the focal point. It would have been better to leave that space open.
I do like the red in the background, however. It just needed to be overlayed, so the stock also has that same sort of color. that was one of the reasons the stock stuck out.
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