Naruto Is Vector

[VeaZna]

veazna.deviantart.com/art/Naruto-Is-Vector-104605474

[Black Astral]

Hello,

• Pros
  
  • This is one of the best vectors of Naruto I have seen in a long time. You get major props just for that in my book. Now this is the main point of the piece and it is very well done so you got your main point into the piece. If there is a lack of Pros and a lot of Cons in this rate it is because that is the focal point and I really like it. The problems I have with it are, for the most part, not with the Naruto.
    
  • I liked how you did most of the brushes. The [mostly] grudge[ish] background against the smooth Naruto makes this piece a little more appealing to me.
    
  
  
• Cons
  
  • There is a blurred brush. Most everything else, with the exception of Naruto is pretty crisp and smooth and then there is that random blur. It just takes away from the piece.
    
  • Underneath the mini Naruto the orange fades out. I think that is pretty ugly. I'm not quite sure why I don't like that (it could just be me) but when I saw it I was just like "um..."
    
  • The Smooth Circles. I'm not sure if you tried putting some noise on them or not but the fact that the circles are smooth sorta catches my eye and is a bit unappealing in my eyes. That could just be me. And also you might have tried that and it looked worse who knows.
    
  
  
• Comments
  
  • There is that small duplicate of Naruto up in that corner. I'm not really sure if I like it or not. I only really see it there because it seems you used it as a stopping point for the text box.
    
  • Another thing I'm pretty undecided if I like is the faded headband.
    
  • The text. It's sorta the same thing as the circles as stated above except I think it's fine this way too.
    
  
  

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Overall 8/10

[Amanda]

For whatever reason, i can't view the blown up image on deviant art. Would it be possible for you to up load the image on IMGSHACK, so that I can give you a fair critique

[Assassinator/Young Everest]

Can I just correct your use of the word vector...this is a digital painting...at the most it would be a vexel.

Naruto himself is done very very well, did you do that yourself?
The surroundings however are of poor quality, the brushes are grainy and juxtapose the smoothness of naruto - which I'm really not sure about.
The composition is all off and the whole thing detracts from the main feature...almost like it's trying to draw your eyes away.

Sometimes simple is best.