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Post by JzEx on Nov 18, 2008 7:59:09 GMT
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Post by ŋєт™ on Nov 18, 2008 22:55:36 GMT
It's ok...One huge thing I noticed is the text needs work and the part where you put starring with a white BG is a little sloppy. I would try to do something different with it plus it's Tony Stark not Starks (I was a huge fan of the movie sorry to correct  ). The background itself isn't honestly that bad, but I'm not digging the yellow splatters. It'll take you a while to get back into the swing of things keep going! |
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7.dust
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Post by 7.dust on Nov 19, 2008 10:23:32 GMT
Not a bad start. The concept is great, but it just needs touch-ups. The black text with the white background does look pretty sloppy, I think the idea is great though...just work on that. Iron Man is places pretty reasonably but I would blend the yellow splotches in with the background a little more. Also the "Iron Man" text that goes around the center Iron Man text looks bland.
Don't be afraid to try and blend layers and add effects to text, experimenting only leads to mastery...good start though!
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). The background itself isn't honestly that bad, but I'm not digging the yellow splatters. 
